O k people this is the poem i wrote for my girl..it is the actual story...stated shortly here...well the girls long gone now..but just the memories remain...it contains the true feelings i had..so presenting to you...


The rains have come and yet again,
Distances between us have found no end,
I wonder how long will they remain,
But till they do will give me pain.

What a beautiful Sunday morning that was,
When I first looked at you and had to pause,
So beautiful and radiant you were looking to me,
My first love ? Yes it had to be.

The wind that blew made your hair flutter,
It was then I was forced to utter,
Yeah she’s the one I’m looking for,
But what to do it’s neither and nor.

Then the gift of friendship came,
And I was one who took the blame,
For my heart that was going to cleave,
Since I was the one taking leave.

And then when I was far away,
From time to time I used to sway,
To the world where you were found,
But then I returned back to ground.

Then came the days of lasting rain,
And I went through a series of pain,
Then I disclosed the feelings I had,
And yes was what you had said.

Now it’s been years since that day,
And this wait ought to pay,
Though, rains have come and yet again,
Distances between us have found no end.


POST-NOTE : Me and my friend have decided to make a song out of this....we have got the tune ready and are just waiting till april to record it... :D

POST- POST NOTE: We never got to making the song and dont think it will ever really happen either. :)

Floydian Floydian
26-30, M
77 Responses Nov 23, 2008




No need to, its a fact i already know :P

Yep as always, Im right!

I mean of course...who in the world would take you seriously now.

Thanks lonely cloud.<br />
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Well i was just saying. I dont really take anything seriously btw :)

Nice way to remember your forst love. good

Never got it FFW, and thanks :)<br />
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No you did not....just saying though.

nicely written. Song must be made by now?

Life never is lol!

I'll reply to this comment later...might not be going back after all lol.

No i get to go home for like 7 weeks then i come back. but im really looking forward to it! :)

The plan is to go home in august.

Its a little bit of everything. Plus my friend is back home and im here.

Dude you have to mention what you are referring to then. Anyways idk if i will ever do the song lol.

Tell you about what? I literally sat here and read the whole conve and I could not find anything I dint tell you! :S

Dont mind it anyway...

Oi its cool! lol

Whatever...as long as I am human! :|

Lol anything!!!

Aw there goes the lunatic!!! :P

Yeah go away *chi chic* :P

All i want is my very own floydess back not some lunatic loitering around! :P

masochistic! ;P

On your way lunatic unless you want to be whipped! :P

No i just want floydess back! :P

I guess its the lunatic talking! :P

Isi it just me or what you said does not make sense at all! :/

Come on stop this or i'll stop talking...choose either...

Lol its ok as long as things are right at the end! =D

Oi...i am just kidding lol

Hehe why? because she is after you now? Wait btw i just realized here you are saying she wants to kill me and on the other one you are not so heartless considering me for phedo....you double crossing witch!!!!!!!! :P

What?! ?_?

You mean to say she wants to kill me? :/

Guess its a part of being a gracious an awesome master! :P

Haha you know that has a weird undertone attached to it that sounds like thank you gracious master...so when are you dying? :P

I likes too, a student who knows how to respect the teacher! :P

Its both! Me a good teacher, you a fast learner! ;)

Awesome you are a fast learner ;P

Hehe how'd you know I am a sneaker? :P

Hehe sneaky sneaker!! :P :P

Haha you sneaking around? what time? :P

Woah brain damaged people to be sorted out by lunatics...news of the century lol! :P

Hehe I remember that what i mean is why would I need to revisit?

why any?! :/

psychiatrist? :/

And what exactly should I infer from that? :P

Hehe its cool if you dont want to show any, dint mean to make you feel pressurized!:)

Then show me those!!!! I want to see your baby pics!! Hehe!!

Hehe I see! :P<br />
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Then show me a normal one and let my imagination get to work! ;)

Why?<br />
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Well then look for one?

Thankfully picked up at last!! :P So do I get to see a pic?

Ooo i totally need to see a pic of you like that!!! Cant imagine you being like that!!!

Why do you even have to be in a villain category? :)<br />
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Lol! :P

Hehe you and scary dont even fall in the same category! :P<br />
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Like I said i dont plan to in near future! :)

oh this kind of haunting you mean? This could be my fodder for writing too! :P

:) I dont plan to stop writing anytime soon esp. after what you just said! ;P

Thanks and sorry for the misty eyes! =(

=D thanks if only i could unlock the chains but i will someday no going back on that =D

Youre so talented,I m,ean I realy like it!And i will listen the song with pleasure!Do it ,do it!and please,unlock the chains...pleaseee....

Hehe, yeah! I just hope it works, i think the tune is nice. :-)

Yeah !!<br />
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~ lives vicariously through the youthful ~

Yeah :-)<br />
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I think we have come up with a good tune, watch out for the next rockstar! ;)

It IS ALREADY good El~ <br />
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but I do know what you mean... in the ultimate sense.

Thank you, I hope though it turns out to be good! :-)

regardless of where it all goes.. you have a beautiful muse nonetheless.<br />
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Lets see where we get to, its still a while, thank you anyways! :-)

Aw thank you! :-)

This is such a sweet heartfelt piece floydian. I'm so glad the friendship remains..<br />
Nice work!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww<br />
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Thats an honour too big for my head!

beautiful, i've never read anything quite like this that was'nt by shakespeare or a famos writer.

Heh, yep tender, just so much for 12th april to arrive!! :(


Aww premid, thanks!! :)

Wow, sweetie, this is marvelous, beautiful, is short of a description. I like your style in writing. You know I like a good mind challenging story or poem, but I LOVE the easy to read ones, more; they are just sooo, much more in tune with modern language and knowledge. Great job!, Good for you!

Yep you are right..nothing like first love...<br />
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And thanks for the compliment..