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DISTANCES!

O k people this is the poem i wrote for my girl..it is the actual story...stated shortly here...well the girls long gone now..but just the memories remain...it contains the true feelings i had..so presenting to you...

DISTANCES

The rains have come and yet again,
Distances between us have found no end,
I wonder how long will they remain,
But till they do will give me pain.

What a beautiful Sunday morning that was,
When I first looked at you and had to pause,
So beautiful and radiant you were looking to me,
My first love ? Yes it had to be.

The wind that blew made your hair flutter,
It was then I was forced to utter,
Yeah she’s the one I’m looking for,
But what to do it’s neither and nor.

Then the gift of friendship came,
And I was one who took the blame,
For my heart that was going to cleave,
Since I was the one taking leave.

And then when I was far away,
From time to time I used to sway,
To the world where you were found,
But then I returned back to ground.

Then came the days of lasting rain,
And I went through a series of pain,
Then I disclosed the feelings I had,
And yes was what you had said.

Now it’s been years since that day,
And this wait ought to pay,
Though, rains have come and yet again,
Distances between us have found no end.

 

POST-NOTE : Me and my friend have decided to make a song out of this....we have got the tune ready and are just waiting till april to record it... :D

POST- POST NOTE: We never got to making the song and dont think it will ever really happen either. :)

Floydian Floydian 22-25, M 135 Responses Nov 23, 2008

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*rolls eyes*

No need to, its a fact i already know :P

You keep telling yourself that, Sweetheart!

Yep as always, Im right!

No one at all. There's no need to take such an insane person seriously.

I mean of course...who in the world would take you seriously now.

Geeeeeeez, thanks. -_-

Thanks lonely cloud.



Well i was just saying. I dont really take anything seriously btw :)

You take me too seriously when you shouldn't and not serious enough when you should. =)

Nice way to remember your forst love. good

Never got it FFW, and thanks :)



No you did not....just saying though.

Did I say it was? =)



*shakes head* Na, he hasn't yet, FreeFallWall *running commentary*. =]

nicely written. Song must be made by now?

Life never is lol!

*frowns* Now, that ain't fair. =/

I'll reply to this comment later...might not be going back after all lol.

Ohhhhhhh! *light-bulb flickers on* I geeet it. No crash-landing half way between the two? *wink-wink, nudge-nudge* ;) Lol, I thought that would have been a too short course - even for you! =P But that's really awesome! I'm really glad for you that you'll be spending a nice long time home for a while. =] Give my puppy a massive hug from me! =P Try not to burn down the entire city while you're home making trouble, hey.... =/

No i get to go home for like 7 weeks then i come back. but im really looking forward to it! :)

*uses fingers to count how many months that is* So 2-3 months... but your course isn't finished then, is it? =/

The plan is to go home in august.

Mmm, when are you planning to go home, more or less?

Its a little bit of everything. Plus my friend is back home and im here.

Dude, * pulls a face at you*, I just did.

Because of time, or no musical inspiration to use for it?

Dude you have to mention what you are referring to then. Anyways idk if i will ever do the song lol.

*giggle-giggle* I do't think I was referring to our conversation. =P I meant the girl. And I get first listen to it once you guys finish the song. =D