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I Write Poetry

Love Me!

By: Floydian
Written on November 25th, 2008
By: Floydian
Age: 18-21 , Male
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  • Floydian

    some day maybe you'll use it for good! :)

    Aug 3, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Hehe thanks, btw "ah um sweet" different from just regular sweet?

    Jul 31, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Thanks salar :)

    Jul 31, 2009
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  • salar1

    Nice little ode F .....

    Jul 31, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Haha indian generals dont like poems but rifles i am sure :P

    Jul 31, 2009
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  • PhedoRuka

    hey,all we like your sweet poem,even indian generals!:P

    Jul 31, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Its just like what we had a talk about today, there are sometimes when i feel you can do better than what you do, but thats just sometimes, and its ok, even i feel i dont do my best sometimes.....in any care we are 'stuck' arent we? :P

    Jul 31, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Like you said most of the times I do or probably I dont, its something i believe your s/o feels better right? If not, then you tell me, how hard do you try?

    Jul 29, 2009
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  • Floydian

    for the most part, hmm, when not?

    Jul 29, 2009
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  • Floydian

    what is it? tell me..though i guess i figured it out MY sugar =D



    What do you feel, that is what i am asking?

    Jul 28, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Idk what?!



    Hehe yeah only i blabber :P



    yeah probably, but do we do that? Honestly I mean..talk about me and you..what do you think? Or rather do I do that?

    Jul 27, 2009
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  • Floydian

    I forgot something?! what?!



    You know i just remembered that i promised you that i will make you happy, i am going to try my best :)

    Jul 25, 2009
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  • Floydian

    I love you sugar, thats better? :)



    Honey, thanks...I mean idk, i love you, even you are my everything. I just want you to be happy..

    Jul 24, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Hehe no not confused, i can comprehend it :)



    Well but i did reply dint I?



    Love you too, hehe now are we just going to be saying love you..

    Jul 24, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Just 3 days or rather 2 :P



    and you ignored my love you :'-(

    Jul 23, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Omg this is way back idk why i did not respond.



    thanks honey i love you too :)

    Jul 21, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Thanks, send me yours..

    Jan 2, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Well tink, fancy that, the rest of the poem sucks therefore I cut it out, but still you know I never say no, right? :D



    Yup agree! Ioanna does write, and she writes beautifully too! :D

    Dec 15, 2008
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  • Floydian

    That is a great addition, I am tempted to steal it, but i rather not, you know actually this is a 7-8 verse poem but I cut it short to only the first verse, I'll show you the rest of it someday if you want to see! :)

    Dec 15, 2008
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  • Floydian

    :)

    Dec 9, 2008
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  • boredkiller18

    The shortest poems are usually the deepest.........If they're written well anyway.

    Dec 8, 2008
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  • Floydian

    Yeah dolphins are cute...and anime fishes..dont rem many with them..could you remind me some? I think this poem would be ideal to propose someone..if i find her that is.. XD

    Nov 28, 2008
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  • GrunBun

    Short but awesome.. and i like fish!!! lolz Soem are simply cute.. (i prefer the anime fishies) XD but dolphins arent considered fish but they are CUTE!!! and fun!

    Nov 28, 2008
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  • Floydian

    Thankew...for the comment and the wishes..someone like this..even the thought is gay... :)

    Nov 25, 2008
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  • MizzBlue72

    Short and beautiful. Hope you find someone like this.

    Nov 25, 2008
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