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I Write Poetry

LUCID!

By: Floydian
Written on December 1st, 2008
By: Floydian
Age: 18-21 , Male
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  • Floydian

    moon?

    Apr 13, 2009
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  • WoundedButterfly

    the moon?

    Apr 10, 2009
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  • WoundedButterfly

    the moon?

    Apr 10, 2009
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  • Floydian

    These poems are not as beautiful as this one but they have a emotion attached to them. One is explained in the poem and the other one is my first one which is special.



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    Feb 12, 2009
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  • JollyDevittaRoger

    Well, please point the way to them.

    Feb 12, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Oh nah, this is the final version! No more additions now! I think you have a point there. Will have it framed, but my most prized one is not this one. It would be my first or second poem! =)

    Feb 12, 2009
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  • JollyDevittaRoger

    Actually it does. This is, as you say your most prized possession out of all your works, it is appropriate to have it framed. And you added more detail to it huh? I'd love to read the revised version.

    Feb 12, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Thanks man! This was the poem I worked the hardest on! the inspiration was there but to mingle it with the beauty was a difficult task! I have the first skeleton of this poem I wrote then re framed it a little and then added flesh to it. If it makes sense! LOL

    Feb 12, 2009
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  • JollyDevittaRoger

    Great linguistic skills Floydian, and the fluidity is marvelous. This is an example of a great poem used to speak about the beauty of a woman in the eyes of someone who is in awe of her. I don't always read stuff like this. this is great work.

    Feb 12, 2009
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  • Floydian

    Thanks nightwish..do you write poems yourself?

    Dec 27, 2008
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  • Floydian

    thanks a ton...encouragement is always welcome! :)

    Dec 23, 2008
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  • SaratogaGirl

    I truly enjoyed this. Keep it up!

    Dec 23, 2008
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  • Floydian

    Thanks! :)

    Dec 10, 2008
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  • kime

    OMG!You are a great poet!

    Dec 9, 2008
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  • Floydian

    Fallaway : Hey thanks, I'm flattered!

    Really helps produce better stuff. :)



    Tinker : It is not just my talent. Part of thanks to my inspiration again. :)

    U hear me? eh? :P

    Dec 2, 2008
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  • Floydian

    Fallaway : Hey thanks, I'm flattered!

    Really helps produce better stuff. :)



    Tinker : It is not just my talent. Part of thanks to my inspiration again. :)

    U hear me? eh? :P

    Dec 2, 2008
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  • fallaway

    your talent for writing is mind blowing =) i loved this, it moved me

    Dec 1, 2008
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  • Floydian

    you may do so! :)

    And thanks for the encouragement. It's always appreciated! :)

    Dec 1, 2008
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  • Floydian

    I started off writing something else but it turned out differently, though i like it. :)

    Dec 1, 2008
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