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The Delusion!

 

Look there, seated amidst piles,

Scribbling away,

Surrounded by monotony

He lives in an illusion,

That someday a life etched with melodies,

Will knock upon his realm,

And it will mark the end of this jaded one.

This delusion of life has not been of his making,

But still he binds himself to the belief,

And keeps the hope alive,

Reflecting upon the fact that,

Somehow, light always appears at the end of the tunnel!

 

Floydian Floydian 22-25, M 10 Responses Feb 12, 2009

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It is for the school/work times! =)

Thanks man! I do believe it so happens!

Aww flour thanks I am flattered! :-)

Not exactly let me explain >><br />
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This was the poem I worked the hardest on! the inspiration was there but to mingle it with the beauty was a difficult task! I have the first skeleton of this poem I wrote then re fr<x>amed it a little and then added flesh to it. If it makes sense! LOL<br />
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And btw umbrageous means dark and calescent means hot!

very good my friend maybe you should publish some!

I will have to agree on that, misery is easier to find than happiness, but then if you could do me a favor?<br />
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Review this work..<br />
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<a href="http://www.experienceproject.com/uw.php?e=382467" target="ep_blank">http://www.experienceproject.com/uw.php?e...</a>

Aw dude! thanks! =)

Simple yet deep, vague yet insightful. A reflection of how we all feel at times when it comes to the mechanization of our lives and how we wish to break through them. Bravo Floydian, wonderful work.

Thanks man! I just wrote it out of frustration I suppose!

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