Frutration

My head keeps spinning,
Though its not mine anymore.
You took my life that night
Even though I still draw breathes,
and expel them just the same.
My heart no longer beats at the tempo,
it doesn't flutter with life,
it doesn't fear the simplest of things
nor the most extreme.
Today I would not mind drawing my last breath
I would not mind letting go now.
But YOU, You hold me here,
You keep me close,
You won't let me let go.
I may never know why,
as you took my life that night.
You took it, and I have nothing left.
You said goodbye and didn't mean it,
Now I don't know what you mean,
What's notreal to you, what is.
I'm not sure where to go from here
But I'll solve my own problems now.

 

just another one, nothing special.

imXhereXbutXyouXdontXseeXme imXhereXbutXyouXdontXseeXme
18-21, F
10 Responses Feb 15, 2009

no problem

oh. i think that EP is enough publicity for my poems for now.lol.<br />
but thanx, im glad that you liked it.

it means i loved it and you need to let more people see it.

does that mean that you didnt like it?<br />
or are you tired of readin about the same stuff.lol.

you need to do something, get out there in the world.

thanx jezebel.... now that i reread it, it does seem kinda special... =+]

its a good poem. lol and it is special. =}

lol..... thanks......<br />
i hope the smiley means that you liked it.lol....

:-)

thanx.<br />
i'm glad you liked it.....