It's Raining

the rain is coming down from the clouds
it comes along with painfull doubts

there is water running down my cheeks
can you see those two clear creeks

can you feel my fears, my pains
with my hopes they hunt through my veins

three words until doom or salvation
 

Hacki Hacki
22-25, M
2 Responses Feb 16, 2009

thanks

This is a very well written poem. It's short, but you don't waste any words. I'm sure many others can relate to this - I do.