The light is so hot,

The sun is so far,

The dust is  cloth,

I'm loosing my star.

The bridge between us,

Is crushing so fast

This burdensome dust,

Took us in the past

I was simple clear,

You were so confused,

Your smile that appears

Too hard to adjuste.

I'm proud that i'm cold ,

You're lost like a child,

You're voice now is rough

But still very mild..


PhedoRuka PhedoRuka
18-21, F
5 Responses Feb 17, 2009

this gives light hope and levity...beautiful

*very big hugs :P

(((((BIG HUGS)))))) ^_^

thank you ! *hugs

hi.. nice poem... Hugs*