Two Bullets

there's a bullet in my brain
but it causes no pain
a second is stuck in my heart
and this one just takes me apart

the first came with your voice
back then i was as cold as ice
number two appeared from your eyes
and is the reason for my slow demise

Hacki Hacki
22-25, M
4 Responses Feb 18, 2009

I love this poem. One of my favorites that i've seen so far:)

thanks

i'm glad for you:)<br />
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well... your words made me think, thank you

i just have a busy week and see her only a few seconds a day, only enough to say hello and goodbye, so i keep waiting<br />
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when i wrote this i was thinking about a possible final act of my own tragicomedy<br />
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no need to worry yet<br />
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had you some luck recently?