The Creature

Goyle squats
Alone on the dankest outreaches
Lumpen, skin mottled
Blending with the mould

"I will have beauty!"
Screeches the creature
Shaking a pathetic fist to the Universe
"I will take it from those who have it
And then you shall see
That I am like you
And you like me."


Just a random character that happened to form in my mind at the time.

musicspirit musicspirit
18-21, F
8 Responses Feb 18, 2009

:D <br />
I love the poetic ex<x>pression unfolding before me<br />
I feel like doing a dance with Flowersoul and Stormy<br />
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Hit it!

This poem here is really great<br />
It isn't at all second rate!<br />
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My poem here is not so good<br />
It's not as poetic as it should<br />
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This is to say your poem is neat<br />
Music (flower too!) your poems can't be beat!

:D<br />
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Yay, thank you so much, that is such an awesome comment! <br />
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"don't get me wrong, the peom is not lame." - It better not be >:-( <br />
Lol! ;)

Thanks :) That's okay mr Flowersoul. I know how EP can become like a full time job lol!

Hehe okay :) I'll see what I can do. I know what you mean though, it sounds like there should be a whole story behind it.

I like need to expand on it. Maybe make a sequel.

I like this one too. I might create a story for it.

Quite interesting. I sense this creature has some revenging to do in some story. I wonder what happened to it in the first place.