I Hate You..

((This one's pretty angry)) I hate you.. A dozen lies.. An endless list of betrayals.. A cold hard smile.. Laughing.. Trapped is what I am.. In your invisible prison.. Freedom is an ink drop away.. Torture me.. Scold me.. Keep me.. I hate you.. Free me.. Let me be.. Leave me.. You hate me.. Leave me.. Free me.. Free yourself.. Time is what you have.. Go on stick the dagger in.. Twist it.. Turn it.. I feel nothing.. I still hate you.. Let me go.. Make this stop.. You have the key.. Let me be! Free yourself.. Love has turned to hate..
CaliGirl3 CaliGirl3
36-40, F
7 Responses Feb 26, 2009

Cowboy.. lol.. Yes it was for Shaun... He didn't like it...

This isn't the first time you shared your poetry...remember, you put my poem on here!<br />
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Anyway, this is really powerful...is this addressed to Shaun?

nightwish893... *hugs*... Thank you....

2Qirky..*smiles* Thank you so much...

Moving, CaliGirl! I, too, use poetry as an outlet (& so am often reluctant to share). You know what they say... "The opposite of love is not hate, it is indifference." Awesome poem... definitely not "indifferent!"

I am starting to.. Am slowly mending my heart.. Yes I have been told you have to love to hate.. Otherwise there would be no feelings or emotions.. So neighbors makes sense, in all aspects.. Thanks.. ((hugs))

Sensualbeat.. Thanks.. This is the first time I have really shared my poetry..<br />
Coyotegray.. That is basically what I have done.. I have expressed my feelings on paper.. Let out my pent up and anger and emotions.. It felt so good afterwards..<br />
Pissed of the ex though.. He hated the poem.. lol