just one more time

i will fly to the sun
before my time is done
it is a final song
but one that will be sung
i will sing for the meek
i will speak their silent speak
i will kiss far too deep
before i finally sleep
i will lie in the grass
the stars slowly pass
i watch and i wait
i enter the gate
and it is.
shenightowl shenightowl
51-55, F
4 Responses Aug 22, 2014

sigh... yup... just one more time! I enjoyed your poem here.

The rhyming scheme works very well and the images of someone looking upward to view the skies to dream of flight are very wistful and soulful too.

thank you so much for your kind words

It is awesome like a journey into the depths of romance and passion while drinking in the smells of grass and stars above us.Very well written and i enjoyed reading it,She Night Owl. You have real talent and i will be reading more of your written work now that i know you write romantic poetry

Tell me what's it like when the gates open .
Everyone ponders about that question what is beyond life .

Thought provoking poem

thanks tiger, not planning to go there yet!