Evolution

i'm held hostage by apathy
want to break my chains
unable to do i continue my self torment

sometimes it turns to agony
from the sky the fire rains
from time to time in a brief moment

suffering from fear and pain
i become a savage beast
aggressive and brutal
i slaughter my victims with the mind
with words and thoughts, untold, but deadly

only you can tame that monster
it's you and no one else
lay your hand on it's head
and capture it's heart

hurry before it's consumed
by it's very own might
before it's lost in the eternal night

Hacki Hacki
22-25, M
4 Responses Mar 6, 2009

Thanks Hacki - no need to explain. The piece really speaks for itself. The beauty of poetry; it has a different and unique meaning to each reader..<br />
I love this the second read even better.<br />
Thanks for sharing.

thank you<br />
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it's just the ex<x>pression of the things that went through my head during the ten minutes i wrote it<br />
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you could take it as some kind of self description, with a bit of exaggeration<br />
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if you want to know more just ask and i will try my best to explain it

This is very well written Hacki. I'd love to hear some of the meanings behind the prose.

thank you very much