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I Write Poetry Too

One Day He will be there

he is the popularity at school
every girl loves him, he is like a fame
he is so hot and cute and just so cool
but he doesn't even know your name


the school dance is in front of the door
it doesn't matter who he's gonna choose
there is nothing for you to hope for
because you know you are gonna lose


once again you are passing his house
and once again he doesn't look at you
but don't give up girl because
there is something else that you should do


go ahead and let him know
how much you care for him
don't keep it as a secret anymore
trust me girl you can win


just dare yourself to do that
no matter what he'll say
It really can't be that bad
so don't be afraid


just go and give it a try
and if he doesn't feel the same
don't be sad and don't cry
at least he'll know your name


there are millions of other guys
one of them is waiting for you somewhere
he is just as hot, cute, and nice
and one day he will be there

I actually never publish my poems and songs I hope you won't steal it

GrueneRose GrueneRose 22-25 20 Responses Jan 30, 2007

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another thing that teen age people run into is that you have these grown up feelings
and desires but your too young to do anything about them.I had the same problem when i was a teen.you feel this attraction for the opposite sex and yyou want to be noticed and you want touching and to be loved but your too young to do those things that you desire and if you do go ahead and fall for some one then you run the risk of getting in trouble .

He stood and watched as the girls walked by.they were all so pretty it made his heart sigh,he wanted to be friends with them but he was to shy.he was afraid they would laffand tell him silly boy good bye.

it is so cute love to steel it

I really enjoyed your intensity!!! Keep it coming!!

I like your poem. :)

THE PAIN OF REJECTION IS NEVER GRATER THAN THE PAIN OF REGRET

GruEne Rose. This is a very sweet poem and so appropoe to many situations with the opposite sex.<br />
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If I worried about stealing I'd never put a poem on this site. though since I've written so many poems maybe it's not a bad idea to get a copyriight for them. Keep writing. It's enjoyable. velvetflow

same here... I write a lot of poetry, and share it freely... does it really matter if people will claim it for their own? People will glean and think about the words and their truth in the words... like God gives us breath to live and life to live freely as a gift

same here... I write a lot of poetry, and share it freely... does it really matter if people will claim it for their own? People will glean and think about the words and their truth in the words... like God gives us breath to live and life to live freely as a gift

I love this :) Good job.

Wow, That what my dad says to my sister and me,<br />
"there will be millions of guys in this world" <br />
I love this poem!<br />
You did awesome job!

very sweet and nicely written!

Thats hilarious loooool

once again you are passing his house<br />
and once again he doesn't look at you<br />
but don't give up girl because<br />
there is something else that you should do<br />
<br />
<br />
go ahead and take this bottle, <br />
fill it up with gasoline,<br />
stuff a rag in the top, and with your lighter...<br />
See that open ba<x>sement window?<br />
<br />
<br />
just dare yourself to do that<br />
no matter what he'll say<br />
It really can't be that bad<br />
so don't be afraid.<br />
<br />
I took the liberty of editing a little... I wanted to preserve the voice of the poet while still improving the imagery... was I successful?

that's hilarious

Its not worth stealing.

this is good, and i can relate because i had a crush on this one guy and he ever knew i think he liked me or idk maybe is was jsut pretending and he was so cute too whatever thougjh the clostest i got to him is when he asked me to him a massage on his shoulders only lol then he gave me on e lol

i have know few people and they have even saved them on same day like stalkers wish you could get them in corner and say ok write something for me pro couldnt do their name well. its great poem which every girl can relate to . brought back the thought of mine in school.

Wouldn't think of stealing, nicely written!

I'm a poet too. I like you poem its beautiful. Don't worry, If someone steals your poem i'll cast a spell on them. But, seriously I have that same fear as well; don't let that stop you. Write everything down, save on disk, and put the date on the paper, so you have proof that the poems are yours.

Im so glad I came to check out your poem unicorn .. brought back memorys of my old school crush.. oh man he was so goooood looking ( yummy ) although when I look at the group photo's now.. he wasnt that good looking.. lol Keep writting