Just Peace

Oh mind, you made do

so many things,

took me through the murky

dark streets of tragedy

dragged me through

heaps of losses

hours of misery you

showered on me

made me cry and pine,

and i bore all that,

went through all that 

with a smile

Oh life i ask you just one


let my mind find peace

in what  i have

lonelycloud36 lonelycloud36
41-45, M
3 Responses Jun 1, 2009

soothsayer and 2BR02B (is it to be or not to be) I thank you both. never received a better tribute than this before ever in my life.<br />
thanks and keep in touch

The way you adressed your mind, as if it were setinent, reminds me of william shakespeare. <br />
Nice work

I really liked how you took a concept that is not at all out of the ordinary, but with the right metaphors and imagery you turned it into something completely unique. nice poem! =)