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Rebel's End

Hope the emporer approves of this one ;)

 

 

I never thought my time would run out
Never felt the need to yell and shout
But the walls kept moving in on me
Was it the end or the start of my destiny
I was told life had a role for me to play
But in the game of life I couldn't stay
I dared to color outside the lines
I couldn't live by the rules life defines
I set new rules and played my own game
So it was that to me my own end came
Looking back on it what more can I say
But a rebel would have it no other way

Flicksy Flicksy 18-21, F 4 Responses Aug 6, 2009

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*phew*<br />
I was holding my breath for that approval. Didn't think you'd ever see the post for a bit there lol.. Feels good to breeeathe again ;)

So beautifully stated: an anthem for the rebellion of the soul.<br />
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"Was it the end or the start of my destiny"<br />
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I know that feeling well...thank you for capturing it.<br />
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*Emperor Approved*<br />
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:)

Thank you so much, and i surely will

Beautifully Written. i enjoyed it very much(: keep on writing!!