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I Write Poetry

The Secrets We Keep

By: deleted
Written on August 28th, 2009
By: deleted
Age: 26-30
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24 responses
  • mpde

    So true for so many people who survived abuse in some form and very well put, u certainly have a gift.

    May 23, 2012
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  • SadEyedAngel126

    it sounds like you speak from the heart

    Sep 24, 2010
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  • northguy

    I love this poem. Stark realism that speaks of the true characteristics of the heart.

    May 1, 2010
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  • Cazma39

    perfection

    Mar 12, 2010
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  • ClickShotBang

    that was beatuifully written, i loved it. (:

    Mar 6, 2010
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  • Caslite

    it is beautiful exactly what i go through

    Feb 10, 2010
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  • homemade

    here is a poem for you, As i look at the stars above, i know some where out there is my true love, I have been hurt before no one knows what went on beside those closed doors, the pain that was held within, made me wonder would the heartach ever end, but i wished apond a falling star and i know my true love isn't that far,so,if i find true love or it finds me then we'll both be happy. I liked your poem it was nice.. If you want to E-mail me feel free Debbie

    Jan 16, 2010
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  • ayomay

    oh, how lovely, well written and thought off. can i borrow it ? just gonna put it in my notebook,, thanks,

    Jan 14, 2010
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  • purpleblaze

    its so beautiful n believable. the word simply manages to reach deep inside me n stir alot of sentiments hidden within me... BRAVO! keepMichaeling

    Jan 11, 2010
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  • black803

    "From countless whelps"



    Lovely and true words...

    Jan 1, 2010
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  • BehindBlueEyes11

    Very nice. Often times I feel the exact same way

    Dec 23, 2009
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  • logicalcontradiction

    raw truth

    Aug 29, 2009
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  • smartchick1

    I can relate, I empathize, I get it, I feel it. I am this.



    Thanks for expressing it.

    Aug 29, 2009
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  • mashedwards

    Love the imagery. It is easy to feel alone sometimes. I just wrote a story about someone who is all alone, and the story is the only way he will ever be able to speak, because he is otherwise beyond contact.



    It only takes about 6 minutes to read, pls. give it a try!



    http://thehappeningstory.blogspot.com/

    Aug 29, 2009
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  • noraone

    real words affect the heart deeply

    Aug 29, 2009
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  • kofy

    You said beautifully (and painfully) what I am living now.

    Aug 29, 2009
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  • hunk11

    Great poam

    Aug 28, 2009
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  • lifesbutadream

    It is my pleasure, you have talent my dear (:

    Aug 28, 2009
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  • AndrewPenney

    Very powerful, ReDefiningMe. I am a bit like that, or maybe we all are. When I am under stress I won't let anybody know but the walls come down when I am sleeping and I will have nightmares where I am screaming in frustration, or crying.



    Take care --

    AP

    Aug 28, 2009
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  • lifesbutadream

    beautifully written (:

    Aug 28, 2009
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  • beachwalk

    The words are so real and that is how I feel

    Aug 28, 2009
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  • 1Babe

    This is really good.

    Aug 28, 2009
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  • LittleLena

    I love it :-D

    Aug 28, 2009
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  • glenara

    well written - the nature of human suffering ............ just letting go the tears of sympathy.......

    Aug 28, 2009
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