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Yeah The Pink Bunny Does...

I write... well I think it's poetry, but then again, I didn't pass English. I failed school.

I don't even know what different types of poems are about. I just write. I write about how I felt at significant times in my life. I love emotional writing, saddens me and brightens me, all at the same time.

Here's me, 12 years old, infatuated:

The Game Transcends

Nobody understands,
My Head in my hands.
This silly game's like a dance,
just psychological romance.

Just breakup, and makeup,
the same game, with a different name.
Always shakeup, then wake-up,
the same blame, with a different flame.

When it ends, will we be friends?
My heart bends, to make amends.
My hand extends, for yours it contends.
Yeah it depends, if this game transcends.



by The Pink Bunny

 

What do you think?
Is there somewhere I can go to develop my writing, and websites I can peruse to find out about structures of poems?

KavookiSoldier KavookiSoldier 16-17, M 3 Responses Sep 9, 2009

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I enjoy your writing. the more you do the better you get.

Thank-you, that means a lot to me.

Well I think you have a lot of potential. The nature of poetry is to relate a story by evoking emotional response. It is an interpretive style of story writing.



There are books in local libraries that can teach about how to structure different types of poetry and teach about rhythm and meter. But in the end it all comes down to what you already have, talent.