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Bound to silence,
crystals fall,
tears like whispers
and someone's footsteps
in a cold room

sadness seems a shadow on the wall,
the empty spaces,reason and pain that cause,
a blank paper on the floor,
words that are not visible..

seconds..minutes.. ,
everythin look frozen,
shadow-reflection,
whats the reason?whats the reason?
..bound to silence..

amysangels amysangels 22-25, F 14 Responses Jan 18, 2010

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glad u like it

beautiful...

thank u..:)

Thanks for your words; you make me write



.. fragile and priceless

Still water

dripping on paper

a sigh

a promise..



written on your wall



/I hope you can use this response

glad u like it*

This is such a great poem, I can see the room clearly, and feel the silence and motionlessness.



You are great angel

I love it. You kind of read it over and over, and every time you read it, you can think of something new it could be referring to.

I like the imagery....beautifully done.

thanks

I echo DarkTruth.

Very nicely written. I'm not very experienced with poetry, so I can't make a real well-rounded critique

thanku dt

..hi hacki..thanks for writing

lost in solitude

voices echoing

soft spoken words

making no sense at all

in this cold room

emptyness attempting to fill my heart

grief rushing through me with every breath

a forever closed door

denies freedom



hours...days...

the time stands still

shrouded eyes

what's the reason? what's the reason?

...lost in solitude...