Something Older (and Shorter) That I Wrote

Break me down

Build me up

Call me an angel

Call me a ****

Become my nightmare

Calm my fears

Kiss me sweetly

Spill my tears

hold me back

show me the way

destroy my life

come save the day

Two souls in one

switching moods at full throttle

My love, life, and hate) 

all because of a bottle

AidoHwedo AidoHwedo
18-21, F
1 Response Feb 16, 2010

Insightful. Nice economy of verse. You are a promising poet. Now, as for the content itself, remember that our writings are not just a mirror but a guide. If you need a mature sounding board, touch base with me.