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the foundations made out of concrete were breaking down

and you were sinking in the abyss of your free fall

as i fell you glanced at me

and i managed to see one of your tears

 

we were happy

iley iley
22-25, F
2 Responses Feb 27, 2010

glad you liked it..u make me proud !

beautifully written - love the contrast of cold hard concrete falling away to leave a single tear of love...<br />
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you have a gift - thank you for sharing it