Red,red Rose

Can this time with you be any lighter?

Can I see it dwindling any faster

As I watch it slowly


As water from a leaf

Slowly coming to it's end

And falling so quickly

Out of sight

But in its stead the moisture


And in it's place grows

The most beautiful

Red, red  rose........

theredlady theredlady
41-45, F
17 Responses Mar 8, 2010

=) Thank you!

I agree with all the above.=)

Thank you Hedrocks. Where've you been?

that's so beautiful

Thank you so much!....

Thank you. :)

The moisture leaves the leaf as love fades away. Red rose....the very rose that represents love. very beautiful.

Thank you. I am glad you like it. :)

Yes Reece there is... <br />
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Thank you Dex. I love the way you read my work. It truly makes me happy.

I love the way your beautiful poem began with the sad dwindling feeling of waning love, but ended with hope and beauty, Red. Lovely work.

Theres an answer?

Hahaha! Then I won't tell you what it is.....

I still can't figure it out..... I feel winter (which is my favourite season), and cold, and colour. And I am not sure yet.... I like this Red, I like the fact that I can't figure it out

Funny you should mention that...... I was of that state of mind when I wrote it.

You have created an image in my head, I am not sure if it is beautiful or sad........

Thank you Reece.... a random thought from a tired mind.. hehehe

I love this Red, beautiful.....