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Where Ever The Road May Take Us

Follow the fallen leaves that twist in the breeze,
Where the sun rises from west to east,
Where the stars are just in grasp,
Where gilded Heaven meets our cherished Earth,
Where Hades gateway creaks open with desolation,
Where lights shine brightly in the night,
Where darkness gulps us into its cold embrace,
Where sandy dunes glisten a radiant red and gold,
Where foamy waves crash down and sparkly topaz,
Where the clouds are forever forming endless patterns,
Where the picturesque flowers have no names,
Where forlorn streets are lost and yet to be named,
Where vibrant life is hushed death,
Where repugnant death becomes endless life,
Where flamboyant colours fill the pastel landscape,
Where white and black contrast across a map,
Where majestic mountains reach for the crates of Luna,
Where broiling Solar warms our sorrowful blue faces,
Where droplets of crystal ice fall onto our skin,
Where ghastly gusts of wind whip wildly through our hair,
Where a snow flaked blanket falls to our feet,
Where staunched and compassionate love is endless,
Where true comradeship of friends is depthless,
Follow where ever the road may take us,
Granted that we shall always be together.


Floydess Floydess 18-21, F 16 Responses Mar 13, 2010

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*hugs* Thank you, TendereyesPrincess! ♥

Aww, thank you, rt58999. Really glad you liked it. =]

Lovely pictures and some spine tingling lines in that nice poem!

poet79, much appreciated! =) Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on it, it's always wonderful to hear people's opinions. =]



Thank you, dareen. =] *blush-blush* I guess I am. =) Thanks for your feedback and advice - I shall be sure to work on it. =]

Follow the fallen leaves that twist in the breeze,



Where vibrant life is hushed death,

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u r a promising poet , like those from the romantic age where nature is the main concern



lots of images shown in language, easy to understand



i thing u have the talent and u can do better



i wish to see some hidden meanings to enrich the poem



i really liked your wonderful poem... thanks

i really liked this poem. the enegy and the power of that energy is transforming. i thankyou for your time in shairing this with us. have a wounderful day .

Thank you, misteredu! =] If you're tempted, go! Who knows what else you'll find. =D



I promise, I shall!

Brilliant poem. There's a lot of powerful images forming a seducing landscape. Tempted to follow that road.



Congratulations!... and follow the poetry's road yourself

CHERRY tomato. =/ Lol, kidding (but I am a cherry tomato =P) Thank you, Grandma cherry. =) *hugs*



Hehe, aww, thank you so much, Lexxis! =D



Yip, pretty happy, Wackman. =/



tti325, believe me, I know where the sun rises from and where it sets. I want something different - maybe impossible - to happen, for something strange, but still beautiful. =)

guess u never noticed but the sun rises in the east and sets in the west. check it out sometime.

FUNNY! YOU ARE GAY ..

beautiful!...beautiful and dreamy pictures too!

Thank you so much, sunnysundaymorning! =) I'm really glad you liked it and could see the places yourself. =]

Such a beautiful piece of writing! I could see all the imagary in my minds eye even before I saw the photos you added at the end of the poem!

Thank you, Mr Strikerfreeze! ^_^

That is SO AWESOME!!!!!! Great job Ms. Floy! ^~^