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Far Away

By: SouthernThunder
Written on April 4th, 2010
Age: 41-45 , Male
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38 responses
  • Canal12

    You’re close enough to

    feel. lol

    thus great ever!

    Jan 20, 2011
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  • tenderheart35

    suthern thunder,You are wonderful..keep on writing.I liked that "My grasping hand closes nohing but thin air.."

    Aug 14, 2010
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  • cjavotti

    Hey disasster How are you Holding on is everything okay?$

    Jun 23, 2010
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  • cjavotti

    Roisin you and your family are going to be okay

    Jun 23, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    disasster... Thank you!

    Jun 10, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    Pedro... thank you. Your words are very kind.



    Lady... thank you as well, and I'm glad you could find something in the lines that resonated with you. That's all any writer can hope for.

    May 26, 2010
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  • theredlady

    I thought that was so beautiful and heart wrenching at the same time. I feel such an affinity with this poem. You are a great writer. I always love reading what you write.

    May 26, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    mena... thank you!



    8FOOT... Now THAT is an interesting way to put it. Thanks!

    May 26, 2010
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  • Aliva

    Lovely........so very painfully romantic!

    May 25, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    Thanks paco!

    May 24, 2010
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  • paco35

    :)paco35

    May 24, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    Roisin... Thank you, and please know that your aunt and her family have my deepest sympathy, respect and gratitude.

    May 24, 2010
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  • RoisinOConnell

    Oh wow. I've honestly been brought to tears. We just got back from visiting my aunt today, whose husband is in Iraq. His daughter and wife miss and love him very much, and I myself am in the midst of a long distance relationship. Just reading this to myself had such an impact.



    Thank you for sharing your talent!

    May 24, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    red... thank you so much.

    May 11, 2010
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  • theredlady

    I loved this poem. You portray the separation with such perfection. Beautifully written.

    May 11, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    Tri... thank you. You comment is very kind.

    May 11, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    buva... thank you so much. I really like this one as well.

    Apr 14, 2010
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  • buva08

    ilove it.. ithink im about to cry :(

    Apr 14, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    Apastone... thanks again. You are WAY to kind, but I'll take it!

    Apr 12, 2010
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  • apastone

    I do so look forward to when a book comes out...it's like looking at Renoir and wondering how did this beautiful piece come about.

    Apr 12, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    From... thanks for reading and for the kind comment.

    Apr 11, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    apastone... sunshine... thank you both so much for reading and for the positive comments. Every writer needs that ego stroke. : )

    Apr 11, 2010
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  • apastone

    Once again, I applaud you. This is beautiful. Wow...I would love to print this. I hope that you get published soon so I can purchase it....:)

    Apr 11, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    Thanks, blackdress.... you guys are good for my ego, and God knows every writer needs one of those!

    Apr 9, 2010
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  • blackdress

    Wow, ST. You are so talented; that is beautiful.

    Apr 9, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    Sunny... you are WAY to kind, but I'll take it. Thanks for reading.

    Apr 8, 2010
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  • sunnyorcloudy

    This is a brilliant piece! it has the the yin and yang of life, the wants and the desires so close but yet so far...and then it reminds me of my life...my soulmate from New York that i met at the wrong time in life...and then the one here who is way out of my league! look forward to more of your poetry!

    Apr 8, 2010
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  • SouthernThunder

    8... Laurie... thanks for commenting. It's appreciated more than you know.

    Apr 6, 2010
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  • 8FOOTDREAD

    oh just like an arrow through the knees of your heart...excrutiatingly wonderfilled

    Apr 6, 2010
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  • mena23

    Oh my that was so beautiful.

    Apr 5, 2010
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