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The Hunter

By: Hongruilin
Written on December 12th, 2012
Age: 31-35 , Female
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  • RaceCarrington

    Great story, I'm sure it's only me but I would have liked the male female roles reversed, but ya I loved it !

    Dec 12, 2012
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    • Hongruilin

      Lol ... as a male you would prefer to have been hunted by the female? ;-) Thank you for taking the time to read it and comment. I'm glad you "loved it".

      Dec 12, 2012
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    • RaceCarrington

      well it's not really that, I get tired of the male always being the evil one. I just think it would be a breath of fresh air to have that switched up every once in a while.

      Dec 12, 2012
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    • Hongruilin

      I understand. Funny, your the second man today to tell me that they thought the hunter was either evil or cruel and calculating. Whereas I did not think of him in that regard at all. He was actually held captive by her, by what he wanted and valued/desired her enough to put in the extra effort to learn about her. It's interesting the different view or feelings that people get when reading the same thing ...

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  • nanalove

    Speechless, come to Louisiana and with me. I enjoyd the, tension of the hunt, publish this to a sportsman magazine.

    Dec 12, 2012
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    • Hongruilin

      Thank you. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. The tension ... it was what "inspired" me to write this.

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  • diggler

    I swear,I need a jigger of brandy to thaw my blood now.One minute I was crouched down ,eyeing up the prey,and confusing the hunter's heart beat with that of my own,and suddenly I was transported out of the safety of the bushes,and was instead walking side by side,with the soon to be hapless victim,feeling chased,while slipping and falling on a stranger's icy stare. I n other words...I like this a lot.:)

    Dec 12, 2012
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    • Hongruilin

      *laughs* ... Thank you, thank you so much. I liked your response - a lot.

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  • leantannedguy

    Great story, I especially liked the suspense you created when you said ' ...the silent moment between his heart beats'. The end also caught me by surprise. You hunt well my friend.

    Dec 12, 2012
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    • Hongruilin

      Merci! I kind of like that line as well. I've never actually been "real" hunting, I prefer this type of sport. ;-)

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  • DIYman

    Wow tremendous story! That was a real thriller so to speak, and I certainly didn't see that ending coming. You have some serious skills:)

    Dec 12, 2012
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    • Hongruilin

      Thank you my friend. If the end caught you somewhat by surprise then my writing skills have satisfied me. *hugs*

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  • 2011A

    Most excellent. Thank you. You have real talent.

    Dec 12, 2012
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    • Hongruilin

      *blushes* Thank you for your most kind and generous compliment.

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    • 2011A

      You are welcome. It is the truth as I do not lie.

      Dec 12, 2012
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    • Hongruilin

      Then I again thank you for your sincerity and honesty, for those are of utmost value to me.

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  • livelaughlovedream3

    Great story. The last line had me chuckle out loud. ;) Well crafted, my dear. Loved it!

    Dec 12, 2012
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    • Hongruilin

      I was doing a fair bit of "chuckling" myself ;-). Thank you. Am glad you enjoyed it.

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  • FordPrefect42

    Very well written and very clever! I like :-)

    Dec 12, 2012
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    • Hongruilin

      Thanks sweetie. I'm surprised it was at all co-herent given the time of day/night. LOL.

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