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*a Story Bout Real Friendhip*

 Melodia is a tiny fairy who lived in a forest,away from here.  One day she met Anabel,a dragon.''friends''?''friends''they both agreed.
-id like to take u up high in the sky.i ll help u if u are scared.do u want that?anabel asked melodia
-id like that but im really afraid.u see im tiny.i do have wings but so high i could never go.
Melodia closed her eyes n made fireworks in the shape of a dragon.she smiled n said:thats my gift for u.
-hm.thats not enough for me.i would take u so high but u didn accept n now u just do that for me?
Melodia started thinkin what to do to prove how much she cared for her friend.she made cookies in shape of flowers n hearts n put some in a plate under an apple tree. Melodia fall asleep when..-woof!
-hey,she said suprised when she heard the noise.oh a puppy.u like cookies,take some.
-woof woof.thanku,the puppy said.
After few minutes anabel came.
-hi anabel.imade cookies for u.would ulike?
-cookies for me?and he eats?no way!im so angry with u melodia.id help u go so high in the sky but u didn accept.u dont really care for me.u are not my friend,she said n blew fire towards her
melodias left wing got burnt.  She cried.no,it wasn the pain that her wing got burnt but a pain in her heart.
The dragon left n didn appear again.The tiny fairy sad sat under a tree.the puppy sat near her.
-how good friend u are but im so sad.i lost my friend.
The puppy run and came back bringing to melodia a tulip.
-oh thanku my friend.here take some cookies,she said n smiled.
"i have to try again with anabel''she thought.so she flew very far to find the dragon.and when she found her..
-why u came?
-i want to b ur friend again.i miss u
-didn u realize why i burnt ur wing?u r not a good friend for me and u became a friend with a puppy.u hurt me!anabel said.
-ok,melodia said n sad she left
-woof! The fairy saw the puppy who has been there all along since the beginning.
-my friend,i ll always trust u.im hurt but now i know.real friends accept each other,they dont need proof to see someone cares.u were always here,caring and never judged me.thats real and i love n care for u as the most precious treasure in the world.best friends forever,she said n hugged him*
amysangels amysangels 22-25, F 5 Responses Nov 23, 2009

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Hi amyMA

Melodia has a beautiful heart. This is a lovely exploration of friendship and the risk of hurt from reaching out to others.

It is funny because it is said that people who walk their dogs make friends more easily when they meet other people with dogs - so maybe the puppy will help Melodia!

Keep writing and illustrating. This would make a beautiful book!

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That was sweet - and beautifully illustrated, too!

this just made me tears right now.. :[

..im the dragon.. i can never change that..

i was hurting.. yet, still i can't help it..



you've made such a wonderful story..

touched my heart.

:)