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I Write Song Lyrics, Poetry, and Short Stories

And So I Went...

By: wanderingfalcon

Written on February 7th, 2013

I'm letting go of myself,
In this beauty,
In these colors, the lights, noise, heat...
Like an uninvited guest among the perpetual teeming crowds...

I'm letting go of myself,
In this rhythm,
In this struggle, this wonder....
It overwhelms me
and then,
I'm lost.. happily lost...

By: wanderingfalcon

Age: 22-25 , Female

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5 responses

theologian

What is the ending?

Mar 29
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- wanderingfalcon
  is it always necessary to have an ending..?
  life goes on.... the city has so much more to take care of than this little girl who loses her way, but with a slight twist.. she s happy to lose herself in this adventurous, vibrant city... Hopefully, she ll find her way, one day.. :)
  
  Mar 29
  1 like
- theologian
  Big endings are impossible but little endings are nice. Not necessarily necessary but nice to the human brain. :)
  Ahh - I was taking it in different way, a darker way, and it didn't seem to fit. Now I think I see.
  
  Apr 4
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- wanderingfalcon
  true... :) i ll try to improve...
  oh, so i was not able to reach u, at first?.. hmm...i hv a lot to improve, i suppose..
  thank you for reading... and thank you fr commenting....i find it really encouraging and inspiring... :)
  
  Apr 4
  2 likes
Galadabau

Nice. I am also having interest in writing. Can we b frnds?

Feb 8
1 like