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I Write Song Lyrics, Poetry, and Short Stories

You and the Bottle

By: mamapolo
Written on September 13th, 2008
By: mamapolo
Age: 56-60 , Female
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7 responses
  • uniquevision

    I rate that still. Impressive !

    May 1
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  • mamapolo

    I hung a tune on it, but don't know how to post it here.

    Jul 21, 2011
    2 likes
  • lane1777

    great lyric! wouldn`t take long to hang a tune on this write.

    Jul 18, 2011
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  • lane1777

    I want to hear music to this outstanding write..Lane

    Oct 29, 2010
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  • mamapolo

    Thanks. Fortunately, that's history now. I moved on.

    Nov 4, 2008
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  • Momcat52

    Wow.. ya done good, hon...

    Nov 3, 2008
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  • solsunite

    The part "when you crawl inside the bottle, the best of you just crawls away" is really evocative.

    Oct 18, 2008
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