Tear Stained Letter

I wrote a song called Tear Stained Letter and i was just woundering how it sound so please give me feedback

I’m just writing a tear stained letter
From my broke my heart
There was no way out
Of this deep black hole
That broke me into pieces
So this is the end
I’m writing a letter to you
A tear stained letter

Said you’d always be there for me
Your plans changed at a blink of an eye
You left me in the rain
Left me to fend for myself
chucked my heart down the drain
Im just a loner in the streets
Waiting for a new beginning
Now im standing alone
Pen in my hand writing a letter to you

I’m just writing a tear stained letter
From my broke my heart
There was no way out
Of this deep black hole
That broke me into pieces
So this is the end
I’m writing a letter to you
A tear stained letter

You put me through the pain
Of a broken heart
Can’t look into your eyes
And say that I’m alright
I’m standing In the rain
So you can’t see me cry
Still wondering should chase you out the door
Or paint you in the rain
So now I’m standing alone
Pen in my hand writing a letter to you

I’m just writing a tear stained letter
From my broke my heart
There was no way out
Of this deep black hole
That broke me into pieces
So this is the end
I’m writing a letter to you
A tear stained letter

Tear stained letter
A tear stained letter
A tear stained letter to you
Aero7054 Aero7054
18-21, F
May 21, 2012