I think I came up with a really good idea but I'm shuck at the moment here's the start of the chorus i can't seem to firer out how to end it.  I would like feed back on the idea, I mostly write Parodies but I'm trying to be serious and i want to know how it is.

Every time I look at you, It's like I died and went to heaven

And Every time I hear your name, My heart skips a beat

Every time I hear your voice, To me it sounds like music

And Every time I you talk to me, I feel I could faint


I'm trying to get and ending to finish it any ideas this song is copyrighted so...... IT'S MINE!

DreamingOutLoud DreamingOutLoud
18-21, F
Aug 1, 2009