Listening to the rain

Rain falls on my heart

History repeats itself

Again I fall apart.

Listening to the rain

Come down

Drowning all my thoughts

Sitting on the cold, cold ground

Begging for relief

My broken heart can't stand again

It will never stand the strain

Can't lose the fight this time

Praying with all my might.

Keep him, keep him

Safe within my sight

Don't take this one away from me!.

theredlady theredlady
41-45, F
2 Responses Feb 21, 2010

LOL I read this back and thought it was one of my worst. I'm glad you appreciate it though. I guess I'm my own worst critic.

Stunning & heartbreaking.