One Last Time

I say goodnight

One last time

A lasting kiss

To end the night

With you there

Me here

And lingering thoughts

We haven't dared

I kiss you


And love you

From so far

Both of you.......

Shining brightly

In my  bloodshot eyes

Soaked with tears

I cry

Good night.

theredlady theredlady
41-45, F
9 Responses Mar 10, 2010

LOLOL I agree.. I like it just the way it is!

ROFLMAO! Ersatz!.. That phrase can be easily misconstrued you know!

im glad u r better*

ahh good! I'm good. I was a little down yesterday, but I'm good now.

still 2 o clock ..ok -class finished!! :) hope u ok.hugs

Thank you Ames! How are you this morning.....uh evening...... heheeh

wow im speechless redlady-amazing!

That is a beautiful interpretation thank you. I wrote this with the reader making an interpretation in my mind.

This reminds me of a mother I know, who give her siblings a chance to make their own decision's to leave her side at such a young age, even though they both were safe and secure under her wings. The mother decided that their happiness was more important than anything else in the world