Struggles

I am a struggling author and i am only 14. I would really appreciate any help i can get, thanks. I am interested in fantasy andam actually writing a book about a teenage boy who watches his father die. The boy grows up with a mage a sets out to get his revenge when the mage eventually dies. I would accept any comments, remember that everyone is a critc. Thanks again!!!
uck41 uck41
18-21
1 Response Jul 12, 2010

so thats his past right? yeah. its good. but what is the story going to be about besides his dad? hes looking for his dads killer, but he also has a life right? or is it a travel story? his journey to finding his revenge?