I Wrote a Poem
***authors note***
im am NOT good at writing poems, i normally stick with drawing.. this was an assignment i had to do for an english class but it says i need to use it in a discourse community.. i figured this website would be awesome because i get real feedback.. so PLEASE DONT JUST READ COMMENT TOO..even if its a small one.. thanks!!
Corrupt
Corruption of the televised
taking words out of context
from this to that to the other
leading to a fatal demise
lifetimes have past through
questioning the leaders,
the ones we helped elect
the gossips
jumps at the scene
an almost constant obsession
to derail the train
degrading the meaning of informed
to that of less value
from this to that to the other
leading to a fatal demise
im am NOT good at writing poems, i normally stick with drawing.. this was an assignment i had to do for an english class but it says i need to use it in a discourse community.. i figured this website would be awesome because i get real feedback.. so PLEASE DONT JUST READ COMMENT TOO..even if its a small one.. thanks!!
Corrupt
Corruption of the televised
taking words out of context
from this to that to the other
leading to a fatal demise
lifetimes have past through
questioning the leaders,
the ones we helped elect
the gossips
jumps at the scene
an almost constant obsession
to derail the train
degrading the meaning of informed
to that of less value
from this to that to the other
leading to a fatal demise
By:
chaoticL
Age:
18-21
,
Female
