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I Wrote a Poem

My Poem

By: loobiesa
Written on April 10th, 2007
By: loobiesa
Age: 18-21 , Female
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15 responses
  • elpatitofeo

    Great work :)

    Jul 8, 2012
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  • NaturesSeed

    I love rhythm and rhyme. this is one of my favorites I've read here! Please continue to share your talent.

    Dec 7, 2011
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  • KnobbyKnees

    Don't let the fame you are going to achive spoil your natural talents, Be true to your heart and yourself. A master in the making.

    Feb 13, 2011
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  • loobiesa

    Thank yoy so much :D This is my favorite poem i have written to-date. Your comments mean so much to me, thank you. XxxxxxxxxxX

    Jul 28, 2010
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  • loobiesa

    thankyou to you all, i have a massive bank of poems ready to burst out...think im going to post one on here that is close to my heart XxxxX

    Nov 12, 2008
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  • GeishaGeek

    i loved it i write poetry myself

    Aug 6, 2008
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  • debrah

    hey ,y name aint debrah ae kool

    May 27, 2008
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  • xsadiex

    That's a nice little poem- I hope you continue to write many more oxo

    Mar 23, 2008
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  • weirdslasher

    nice poem......

    hope I can be as great us you....

    Sep 1, 2007
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  • loobiesa

    hey thanx for the comments everybody there great to hear...the last line needs some work tho but ive done that in another version..thanx again xxxx

    Jun 20, 2007
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  • KarmaKatcher

    I think its totally sweet!!

    Can be taken in many contexts.

    Just depends on who you are and where you are in your mind.

    Jun 17, 2007
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  • BowsAndBones

    i loved that too - the imagery, the emotion! i reckon some badly written poems [in my view] are like stone - no heart. that's definitely not a prob here! keep going, i say! :D

    Jun 11, 2007
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  • loobiesa

    thankyou very much that means alot xxxxx

    Jun 10, 2007
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  • HeartLove

    Wow...that's one of the best poems I ever read, it's great, you're really talented :)

    May 26, 2007
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  • HeartLove

    Wow...that's one of the best poems I ever read, it's great, you're really talented :)

    May 26, 2007
    1 like