Kiss Me...an Original Poem By Shannon Leigh (me)

Kiss me good morning

Kiss me good night

Hold me forever

In your arms so tight.

Tell me you love me

All through the day

Show me you love me

In many different ways.

May God watch over us

With His undying love

And bless us with trust

And faith from above.

 

~Shannon Leigh

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1 Response May 20, 2007

I definitely like the poem's set up—the rhyming seems natural, unforced, something that poses a problem to many people, so congrats on that... but, the last four lines seem to switch perspective. They sound more like a prayer than a poem. I'm not entirely sure if that was intentional or not, but other on, it's a good. Nicely written.