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I Want Your Opinion On These Poems of Mine
A personal story in the experience: I Wrote a Poem
May 25th, 2007
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hy, oh, why you left meAlone in this cold world,
Filling my heart with grief,
Turning me against myself?
For what do I have now
Except my worn memory that hurts me so much.
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I would caress your hair, crying silently.
I would kiss you knees tenderly.
I would long for your eyes
And feel sore if you were far away.
I dream of you in my despair
Until I wake up in this place
Which laughs at me hideously,
Telling me you are not with me
And that you never will be.
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What now seems to be a shaft of light
Might be dimmed tomorrow
And you need a solid basement
Not to drown in an ocean of tears
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I will see my Love tomorrow,
My heart sings.
I will see my Love tomorrow.
What else do I need ?
Evil deeds of Time confront us, -
My heart bleeds.
I will see my Love tomorrow,
It's a marvelous bliss.
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  | Posted May 25th, 2007 at 3:06PM your poems are short but filled with a million words, such deep meanings but so simply said. i love them! you got talent   |
 | Posted May 25th, 2007 at 4:55PM the way to say to no be mean, is that you have feelings in beetwen, I am more wrong to give you 5, so I will ask for more supplise, keep up the good work four your love, write all it is coming in your mind heart, and you may find yourself indeed, a feeling writher and a three, where many soulds will come to kiss, to rest and feel the wind blow .....thee |
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