Ok, so I just wanted to say this is the first song I ever wrote, I don't know anything about writing a song.



"The Truth Unfolded"

Verse 1-
Why does my heart beat day by day?
(Every night it's a struggle just to stay!)
Why do I stay on this earth?
(Heartbroken and my soul is torched!)
No friends except for the blades in my hand
For I know they won't leave me just like the rest!

Chorus- Why should I stay?
(I'm just a ******* burden to everybody!)
I'm slowly dying on the inside
(And you are the one to blame!)

Verse 2- My existence has faded
My vision is blurring
I am dying here
(And why should I care?)
Clear water turns red just by my touch
Why do you care?
(You're the one who made my heart crush!)

Chorus- Why should I stay?
(I'm just a ******* burden to everybody!)
I'm slowly dying on the inside
(And you are the one to blame!)

My heart won't ever rise
(For it is dead on the inside!)
My body is numb
Crimson red paints the ground
For I know when I'm dead I'll be safe and sound!

Chorus- Why should I stay?
(I'm just a ******* burden to everybody!)
I'm dead on the inside
(And you are the one to blame..)
Insanexx Insanexx
16-17, M
3 Responses Aug 20, 2014

I can make a song out of that with the lyrics you made !!!!!

Wow ! Just wow ! That's was $@$"$@$"@$@ amazing !!!!

Aha, thanks

Really good although sad