I pulled the trigger today
Not thinking what they would say

Now i see my body lying there
Lying limp on the floor

Who will find my body
My brother or my friend

How will it affect them
Will they cry over the body

Now I wish I could have changed his mind
I didn't think ppl would cry I didn't know they cared

ThomasKR ThomasKR
18-21, M
1 Response Aug 31, 2014

That's so sad

It's thoughts that go through my head

I'm sorry

It's ok :)

Besides it being sad what do you think of it. Don't hold back

It's a pretty good poem. It could use some work though

I don't write poems just randomly decided to try

It's good tho :)

Thank you

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